Showing posts with label order of the laurel. Show all posts
Showing posts with label order of the laurel. Show all posts

Wednesday, March 7, 2018

Maiwen


For Maiwen Skrautibroka upon being placed on vigil for the Order of the Laurel
By Maister Colyne Stewart, March AS 53 (2018)

Lo, praise we power / of people-kings
Of spear-armed Danes / in days long sped
Yet power shows / in strength of word
And bone-led cord / and battened cloth
Oft Maiwen worked / as Welanduz
Her anvil lace / her ‘ammer thread
Each stitch a blow / each bolt an ingot
Her smithy adorned / with swords of horn
With rippers of cloth / and coveted
Pins, spools and bob/bins, scissors, shears
Of Frijjō fond / her fashion fierce
As Skrautibrok/a she’s known
 Her trews a treas/ure telling much
Now Kyng and Cwene / she comes before
So hailed as Hlaef/dige her now call
Of famed Maiwen / far flies her boast
A scion of Val / in Scadian lands

This poem is written in the Old English style to match Maiwen’s original 7th century Anglo-Saxon persona. Anglo-Saxon versification were written in what are known as Siever’s Types, with different types of lines based on where the stressed and unstressed syllables lied. For this poem I used what is called the B-line, which contains four syllables, with the stress on the second and fourth syllables. Each line in the poem is divided by a caesura (a pause, denoted by a slash). The poems were alliterative, with the third stress alliterating with the first and/or second stresses. (All vowels and dipthongs alliterated.) These poems made common use of synonyms, compound words, variation (referring to the same thing by different names) and, to a lesser degree, kennings. Sometimes Anglo-Saxon poets would “borrow” word patterns or even whole lines from other poets, so I have quoted and paraphrased Beowulf in the opening and closing lines.

A foot-noted version of the poem is below with the alliteration marked in bold.

Lo, praise we power / of people-kings
Of spear-armed Danes / in days long sped[1]
Yet power shows / in strength of word
And bone-led[2] cord / and battened cloth
Oft Maiwen worked / as Welanduz[3]
Her anvil lace / her ‘ammer thread
Each stitch a blow / each bolt an ingot
Her smithy adorned / with swords of horn[4]
With rippers of cloth / and coveted
Pins, spools and bob/bins, scissors, shears
Of Frijjō[5] fond / her fashion fierce
As Skrautibrok/a she’s known
 Her trews a treas/ure[6] telling much
Now Kyng and Cwene / she comes before[7]
So hailed as Hlaef/dige[8] her now call
Of famed Maiwen / far flies her boast
A scion of Val[9] / in Scadian lands[10]



[1] These two lines are translations of lines 1 and 2 of Beowolf.
[2] A needle.
[3] A mythical smith.
[4] More needles.
[5] Goddess of love who was also associated with weaving.
[6] Maiwen’s byname of Skrautibroka literally means “fancy pants”
[7] Maiwen is to elevated to the Order of the Laurel at Kingdom A&S AS 53 (March 2018).
[8] An Anglo-Saxon title used in the SCA to refer to (among other things) a Mistress of the Order of the Laurel.
[9] Maiwen is a protégé of Master Valizan.
[10] The last two lines are edited translations of lines 18 and 19 of Beowolf: “Famed was this Beowulf: far flew the boast of him / son of Scyld, in the Scandian lands.”

Wednesday, February 22, 2017

Kalenda Martius

For THL Marie l’Englois upon her elevation to the Order of the Laurel
By TH Laird Colyne Stewart, February AS 51 (2017)

This month will see awe
When at Faire, all a draw,
This lady will kneel at feet of law,
Her voice without flaw.
Woven from rough straw
Music, like gold, flows forth from her jaw;
The iciest hearts her tunes can thaw,
Emotions, felt deeply, and so raw.
All in awe,
See no flaw,
Her place her foretold by ka.
Like owl claw,
I here draw,
Dame Marie, I have estampida.



Based on the 14th century estampida “Kalenda Maya” by Raimbaut de Vaqueiras. The original poem was six stanzas long (each with identical structure) but as estampida are mono-rhyme poems I only wrote one stanza. (Italian has a lot more words that rhyme than English, making recreating Italian poetic forms in English a challenge.) You may notice that I did repeat a few of my rhyming words, but even with the glut of possible Italian words to choose from Raimbaut sometimes repeated words himself. (So I don’t feel as bad about that.) I based the structure of my stanza on the structure of Raimbaut’s. The last line also directly reflects the last line of the original which states: “N'Engles, ai l'estampida.” [Dame Engles, I have the estampida.]

Below is a version of the poem with footnotes.

This month will see awe[1]
When at Faire[2], all a draw,
This lady will kneel at feet of law[3],
Her voice without flaw.
Woven from rough straw
Music, like gold, flows forth from her jaw[4];
The iciest hearts her tunes can thaw,
Emotions, felt deeply, and so raw.
All in awe,
See no flaw,
Her place her foretold by ka[5].
Like owl claw[6],
I here draw[7],
Dame Marie, I have estampida.




[1] The title refers to the first of March, as it is in March 2017 that. Marie will be elevated.
[2] The elevation will occur at Kingdom A&S.
[3] Referring to kneeling at the feet of Their Majesties.
[4] Marie is being made a Laurel for her knowledge of Medieval music. I here draw attention specifically to her singing, likening it to Rumpelstiltskin’s ability to weave gold from straw.
[5] Ka is an Egyptian term for part of the soul.
[6] The owl is the bird of wisdom, as Laurels are supposed to be wise as well as learned.
[7] As in I am drawing (or writing) the poem.