By THlaird Colyne Stewart, January AS 49 (2015)
From West he came to
wed the north
Strong-armed and true and stalwart bold
He took a crown in
clawed paws strong
Blood-song brightened and
to battle sworn
In Shire he came sweet
song sung his blade
Cloak-danced with foes clad
bright in mail
Breaker of rings brought
forth wound-sea
Fed eagles bold and
foes he tamed
Then jarl of old earl
among earls
Trod the spread cloak two
blood-worms held
Former prince-king Foe-man
hammer
David, raven feeder dared
all to battle
In spear-din met swift
lion and wolf
Slayer of giants singing
of the deed
Took note the skalds took
note the mighty
Slaughter-dew flew as
sun light fell
They battled long bold
fighters both
Found honour there in
foe-man’s fierceness
When din was done down
fell the jarl
The Western lion had
won the day
At Tournoi de Coeur des Glace in 2015, His Royal Highness
Steinnar met Syr David Martin Failsworth in the finals of the grand tournament.
Syr David was the first Prince of the Principality of Ealdormere, and the first
King of the Kingdom
of Ealdormere , and is one
of our greatest fighters. His Highness gladly met this living legend in
honourable combat and was able through his own great skill to carry the day.
This poem, written in an Eddic verse form called Fornyrðislag, is to
commemorate this meeting of giants. Fornyrðislag consists of 4-line stanzas,
with each line broken into two half lines. The first half line had to have two
stressed and two unstressed syllables, while the second half had to have two
stressed and either two or three unstressed syllables. It was an alliterative
form, with either the first or second stressed syllable in the first half-line
alliterating with the first stressed syllable in the second half-line. As was
not unusual with Nordic verse I also made liberal use of kennings.
Below
I have included a foot-noted version of the poem.
From West[1] he
came to wed the north
Strong-armed and true and stalwart bold
He took a crown in
clawed paws strong
Blood-song[2]
brightened and to battle sworn
In Shire[3] he
came sweet song sung his blade
Cloak-danced[4]
with foes clad bright in mail
Breaker of rings[5] brought forth wound-sea[6]
Fed eagles[7]
bold and foes he tamed
Then jarl of old earl
among earls
Trod the spread cloak two
blood-worms[8] held
Former prince-king Foe-man
hammer
David, raven feeder[9] dared all to battle
In spear-din[10]
met swift lion[11]
and wolf[12]
Slayer of giants[13] singing of the deed
Took note the skalds[14] took note the mighty
Slaughter-dew[15]
flew as sun light fell
They battled long bold
fighters both
Found honour there in
foe-man’s fierceness
When din was done down
fell the jarl
The Western lion had
won the day
[1] HRH
Steinnar originally hailed from An Tir, whose heraldry features a lion.
[2] Battle .
[3] Bastille
du Lac.
[4] When the
Norse dueled they sometimes put down a cloak, upon which the combatants had to
stand.
[5] A
chieftain or king, here referring to the fact he is Prince of Ealdormere.
[6] Blood,
indicting that he is hitting his opponents.
[7]
Defeating enemies.
[8] Swords.
[9] Warrior.
[10] Battle .
[11]
Steinnar is a lion, the symbol of his former home An Tir.
[12] David
is a wolf, a symbol of Ealdormere.
[13] Thor.
[14] Norse
poets and bards.
[15] Blood.
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